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Word bloat and privacy policies

by Matthew Stibbe on May 18, 2010

How many words do you need to say ‘we will protect your privacy’? Five if that is your real intention. However, if you want to make money, you need a lot more, as these graphics from the NY Times show. (Hat tip: Steve Clayton.)

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Christopher May 18, 2010 at 3:22 pm

Wow, just wow. lol. Interesting data though.
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Christopher Prince Boucher May 19, 2010 at 3:03 am

Those graphs do not really show anything other than what happens when you scale. The New York Times along with the rest of the corporations are going to lose their control and ownership of the publics distribution channels.

This is where the national smear campaigns occur. Good luck, but Facebook is here to stay. New York Times is dead.
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Chris | Martial Development May 21, 2010 at 2:19 am

That’s a fascinating graphic, but it is missing one critical piece of information.

The current NYTimes privacy policy is approximately 4700 words.
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Matthew Stibbe May 21, 2010 at 7:23 am

Ha ha! Perfect. Thanks for that. How ironic. Matthew

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Tammi Kibler May 28, 2010 at 3:01 pm

If I make my privacy policy longer will I make more money?
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Matthew Stibbe May 28, 2010 at 3:24 pm

If only it were that simple! :)

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